Waiting in the Garden

A poem i wrote just a bit ago. It’s probably one my favorites for describing what addiction felt like for me. I hope it may resonate with others

You called me home with hands that shook like mine, sweet-talking ruin in a velvet tone, promising silence when the world got too loud. I crawled back to you again, again each time thinking maybe this time, you’ll keep me whole. But you never did. You painted my pain in gold, said the cracks in my soul made me worthy, said, Don’t you see? I’m the only one who knows how to love you like this. You weren’t wrong. You knew just where to touch. Just how deep to cut. I gave you everything. Time. Trust. Teeth. The taste of joy. My name. You took it all and whispered, You’re nothing without me. And I believed you. Because I was tired. Because I was small. Because part of me wanted to bleed if it meant I didn’t have to feel. You waited in the garden of my mind, like some damned messiah of oblivion, promising peace at the price of annihilation. And still, I came. But now I see you. Not a god. Not a lover. Not a savior. Just a shadow dressed in need, a hunger that grew a voice and learned my name. You hurt me. You held me. You hollowed me out and made me think that was love. But listen I forgive you. Not because you deserve it. But because I do. I lay you down now, in that lonely garden, and walk away with blood on my hands, but breathe in my lungs. I am not yours anymore. And that is grace.

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That's the best poem I've ever read

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Seriously?

That’s beautiful!

Wow that was excellent!!

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Thanks for sharing!

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Absolutely
It made me feel

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Thank you I really appreciate it. I post it for that reason especially if it can help others feel seen or heard

Wonderful! I agree, I relate. Wish you luck in your recovery.

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Beautiful Rachel, thank you for sharing that.

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Thank you for posting. Powerful message and you can feel that you turned a corner.

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loved this🩵🩵🩵🩵

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It made me ache hard - and I mean that as the highest compliment because that’s what addiction made me feel - excellent writing - don’t stop

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Thank you so much

Damned messiah of oblivion and annihilation. Powerful. Ty.

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My therapist will love this

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I love it

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Amazing

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That's spectacular! Exactly what that feels like! I love it when we don't lose our God-given talents, that's awesome!! Thank you so much for sharing this!!

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Something I just wrote:
These fools only know physical form, pleasure the Pinnacle, drugs shortcut to glimpse the sliver of shimmering Spirit, but still don't see the heart and soul of self actualized, archetype of the universe. Slumbering thievery, magician's tricks and games they take serious, never earnestly hunt and pursue knowledge and truth, fake and flimsy collagen form only appearing to value appearance, fearing none but Self if they were to hear the divine resonance of energies that make up all of Reality, great for getters raised without remembrance as if orphans were the order of the day, dumb and dumber running from infinite thunder World falls around them don't hear yelled Timber and oak tumbles upon them til death tear them apart